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    So, I've decided I want to TRY and draw a comic book, as a few of you already know. I've been doing some research and doodles lately, trying to come up with a design for my characters for Spaghetti Western. I'm trying to pull pointers from other manga while developing my own style. So I've been drawing some doodles and during a session of OP doodles, I happened to draw Eddie, SW's main character, in the same pose as a panel of Luffy in Volume 2, just to get a feel for proportion and whatnot. So, here I now present a really shitty campic, just for you, Arlong Park.



    Please note this is only my second day of serious drawing, so I'm looking for criticism and pointers, guys.

    I'll start by noting that I fucked up the ear.
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    Yeah, the ear is pretty messed up :P What I would advice you is to relax your grip on the pencil and make more fluid lines for one. =)
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    Congrats! You're a better drawer than me!

    Yeah, the ear DOES look like a cinnamon roll. Kind of like the guy from Space Cases.


    But like Chrissie said, calm yourself when drawing.

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    I guess it doesn't help to not be sitting up either. :\

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kitsune Inferno View Post
    I guess it doesn't help to not be sitting up either. :\
    You were lying down while doing this?

    What the fuck? I can't even write while lying down. I'm Osaka (Azumanga Daioh) incarnate when it comes to that! I pass out before I do anything.

    That doesn't really matter though, since I can sleep anywhere. ANYWHERE!

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    I'm too floor-oriented. :\

    I'm laying on the floor right now as we speak :|

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kitsune Inferno View Post
    I'm too floor-oriented. :\

    I'm laying on the floor right now as we speak :|
    I'd fall asleep if I did work on the floor.

    Hell I've fallen asleep on:
    -the floor
    -a chair sitting up
    -a desk
    -a toilet
    -a bathtub
    -a shower
    -a keyboard
    -a car in the backseat while the car was spinning out of control
    -a bed

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    Quote Originally Posted by Insider2000 View Post
    I'd fall asleep if I did work on the floor.

    Hell I've fallen asleep on:
    -a bed
    You're weird.

    In any case, I should at least share a few more of my doodles. (and my nose)



    I spent a good while doodling different facial features of Eddie's last night. I took a picture of some of the more decent ones. I like how the one on the bottom right ended up turning out without referencing anything. Has a "Luffy's pissed" feel, though somewhat unintentionally.

    Same issues here in that I probably should be sitting up when I draw. But anyhow, this was probably the first serious doodle session I've had.

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    Hey man, all I can say is this: keep drawing.
    Eventually, you're going to find out that trying to adopt a certain style means shit.
    Look at me, I'm still learning, but I've improved vastly once I decided to stop being serious and just go with what feels natural. It'll be the same for you.
    Also, needs more cactus.
    BTW, I'm almost always listening to the radio or music when I draw, and that's supposed to be a bad idea.
    I'm still getting used to it.
    EDIT:@Insider:
    You're even sleepier than I am, though I think I'm tired a lot more often (I'm willing to bet anyway).
    'Back seat of a car while it was out of control?'

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    I don't have Kakutai's 'image' in my head yet. He's gotta be like Pandaman-level in terms of epic.

    With that said, I still can't decide on Eddie's final image. The only thing I'm set on is the cowboy hat, the handkerchief, the ponytail, and the facial details for the most part. Oh, and his hair's gotta be brown.

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    Uhm...you know Kitsune, you must learn the basics first.
    I am thinking about making a Drawing class thread.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Insider2000 View Post
    Congrats! You're a better drawer than me!

    Yeah, the ear DOES look like a cinnamon roll. Kind of like the guy from Space Cases.


    But like Chrissie said, calm yourself when drawing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kitsune Inferno View Post
    I'm too floor-oriented. :\

    I'm laying on the floor right now as we speak :|
    I lay down a lot when I'm drawing too. It's not a bad thing (except for maybe some back troubles)
    If anything it helps you learn depth perception better :V
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    I normally draw while sitting crosslegged and having my binder and paper on my lap. Usually, on whatever surace I'm drawing on, I have my face practically pressed onto the picture.

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    I can't do that. It makes my feet fall asleep.
    Which normally isn't so bad, but whenever I'm drawing, someone (or something) always ends up making me get up and I almost fall on my face XD
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    Thanks for the criticism. I need to take drawing classes

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    Kitsune,I seen your drawing this a really a nice and I like a pencil drawing,this a best work.

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    Here drawing you draw,this was fantastic and actually fact was pencil drawing looks nice and it looks original,really very nice drawing.

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    I have nothing creative or good to say... don't know jack about drawing.

    So instead, I am just gonna make fun of your drawing!! Ummm... the perspective is bad, the smile is uneven, TOO MUCH Luffy's inspiration, the ear looks like a doughnut and the hat is just... awful. Mwahahahahahahahahahahaha
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    Quote Originally Posted by zachri View Post
    I Love Cinnamon.

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